REACTIONS

My reaction to the first essay is one of admiration and respect. It is well written of course, the content reflects the wisdom of one who has done a through and honest self-examination. Her grasp of human shortcomings is evident. If she had added self-seeking to the list, she’d have named the Big Four as it is referred to in my fellowship. Selfishness, dishonesty, self-seeking and fear ARE the root cause of many a ruined life, causing only, misery, pain, failure and even death to those who subscribe. If the writer is young, she is wise beyond her years !.
2nd essay, nice little story, but where’s the beef ?
3rd story. The man knows his stats, a little history lesson too. Nice touch. A little boring if you don’t like baseball. Damn, I hate when that happens too !
4th Erskine Academy ? She is so sweat ? This marching dude needs that "unique get along feature".